My Place

Content: I noticed quite a few grammar mistakes like where you use the wrong word. For example you would say weather when you actaully meant whether. You also write in short, choppy sentences with little or no detail. I just feel like I can't relate because I have no idea whats going on. Maybe if you took one of your typical daylog entries and added some details it would be easier for an outsider or a reviewer to get involved in your diary and it would be easier to relate to. I'm sorry I just couldn't get into your diary. You seem like a nice person. [40/60]

Updates: Consistent, not every day but you're regular. The only thing about the archive page is that I would suggest that you archive some of your older entries. If you don't know how to do this just ask me and I'll explain it. [10/10]

Errors: Nope. [10/10]

Typing: Some but not enough to make it hard to read.[10/10]

Layout/Design: The layout was designed by you and just about any self-designed layout is very cool by me. The layout is very simple and organized. The colors are all good and the text is big enough to read, thats always a plus. The only things that I kind of don't like are the buttons under your previous five entries. I would suggest making the link for diaryland a regular link with the rest of your navigation. I would also suggest putting the counter under your navigation also. I think that would make it look better. Also, previous and next links make reading and reviewing so much easier. Other than that, the layout is fine. [28/30]

Pet Peeves: Your cast page is one huge paragraph and that makes it kind of hard to read or look up some in a hurry. I would suggest adding some breaks in there or something. [4/5]

Contact: Notes, gbook, guestmap. [10/10]

Extras: Quotes, reviews, about, cast, and pictures.[5/5]

Link: Nope. [0/5]

Returning: I doubt it. [2/5]

Comments: Nope.

Favorite Entries: This was good, especially the how to make part.

Favorite Quotes: "And over the radio transmitter comes a message saying the one of the volunteers wont be in tomorrow as she has an exam. And suddenly what work seemed a lot more fun as it means no more exams." Here.

Opinion Score: [119/150]=79%

Reviewed by: Kaila

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