Bubblegum: Punk

Content: I really related to this entry because I'm having problems with my mom also. I also agreed with this entry about Matthew Shepard. So over all it wasn't a chore to read your diary and for the most part I did enjoy it just sometimes you seemed to repeat yourself but in a way, that lets me know the diary is more for you than for your readers. The grammar was good and so was the spelling, keep up the good work. [56/60]

Updates: Wow, you skipped almost a whole month but I can understand that things happen. Other than that you seem pretty consistent. [5/10]

Errors: None that I saw except some of the things that you support, the buttons weren't showing up but that might not be your fault. [10/10]

Typing: I didn't see a whole lot of major typing errors. The only thing I did see is that sometimes you left out a word. [9/10]

Layout/Design:The layout is kinda nice and I'm assuming that since there isn't a link back to anyone that you designed it yourself. The gray background with the black writing is easy to read and the image adds color but you didn't go gray with bright pink and to me that very good. The image is a girl chewing bubblegum and at the bottom of the image it says bubblegum punk. Its nice and I don't see any problems with it because its also very organized and easy to find things. Good job! [30/30]

Pet Peeves: You really ought to get rid of the pop-up advertisements that come up every time you click a new page. It's really annoying. [0/5]

Contact: Notes, g-book, and e-mail. [10/10]

Extras: A whole page of extras and things you support. [5/5]

Link: No link. [0/5]

Returning: Maybe, I'm not sure. [3/5]

Comments: Nope.

Favorite Entries: This one.

Favorite Quotes: "It seems like it’s getting harder and harder for me to find the time to write in this diary. Which is a shame because I’ve always loved that I can just sit down and let my fingers tap out all the emotions and stress that are swirling around in my head." from here.

Opinion Score: [128/150]=85%

Reviewed by: Kaila

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